RIHAM ABUZINADAH
MAY 21, 2014
ACADEMIC WRITING
Analyzing a Short
Argument
In
a letter to the editor, Robert Raywift, the writer argues that overnight
parking should be removed, especially from 2 a.m. to 6 p.m. for some causes
that was mentioned in this letter. In the writer’s letter, there are some
fallacies that I could figure, and I would like to represent some of them and
explain why they are wrong.
First,
the author states that when someone park at night, it is similar to the case
that he has a garage in the street, which is against the law. I think this
argument is wrong and I can say that it is a false analogy, since the author
compares to things that are irrelevant to each other. More clearly, parking
overnight is something totally different from having a garage because when you
have a garage, you own it and it is totally yours; however, when the person
park at night, that would be just for a certain amount of time and he will not
own the place.
Second,
the author argues that if people do not agree with his argument, they are not intelligent.
Also, he says that if they are intelligent, then they should put into account
that overnight parking has to be eliminated. I believe that this statement is
not suitable, for the writer intimidated the audience and discourages an open
discussion. In addition, it is inappropriate to describe those who are against
the issue as not intelligent individuals.
In
the author’s third argument, he indicates about the experiment that has been
done by the Chief of Police, Burgess Jones, who did the experiment about the
overnight parking. He prohibited cars parking from 2 a.m. to 6 a.m. So, he
mentioned that during the four hours there was not one accident recorded. This argument
is weak because the experiment was done in a short time, which I could consider
it a false cause because the period of the experiment is not quite enough to be
generalized.
The
forth argument indicates that there is no need to make such solution for
overnight parking, since they believe that streets are safe enough at night. On
the other hand, the author attacks these people by claiming that they do not
have any idea about the safety procedures. Therefore, I think this is a straw
man fallacy as he attacks people without giving them the chance to argue.
Finally,
the author provides an argument of two people, Kenneth Taylor and Police Chief,
who assert that prohibiting parking from 2 a.m. to 6 a.m. is the best way to
inhibit overnight parking. I believe that this is a wrong argument and can be
considered begging a question because he does not provide any solution, but he
is circling around the same issue.
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